n many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays,

people

from many regions are moving away from their

friends

and their families in order to find a job. Despite

of

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having both merits and demerits,

this

trend has become more familiar in the modern era. In my opinion, I find

this

practice

more practical and

this

essey

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essay

will describe some of the advantages in

favor

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of the trend of migrating to other regions rather than staying at home. To support my view, I strongly believe that it is important for a person to get himself out of

the

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comfort zone if he has to shine in his

life

.

This

is the fact that you can not expect yourself to

be succeed

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in your

life

without breaking the

shackle

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of comfort. In fact, moving to a different region helps a man to get enough

exposures

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in

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the real world which is not possible by staying with

the

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family or

friends

.

For instance

,

the

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person who is far from his family and

friends

tend

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to become more responsible as he has some concerns regarding his family

life

.

Also

,

this

practice

can help

people

to prepare themselves for

som

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some

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extreme situations which they have to deal

.

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For

this

, they are always attentive to their

works

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and somehow they can manage themselves to cope with every difficulty.

Although

staying at home with families and

friends

can bring some advantages to the

people

like living a peaceful

life

or having enough

supports

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, the main disadvantage of

this

practice

is that they are not aware of the real world as they have no experience of facing it at all.

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, a family guy tends to become more timid and shy which

put

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a

negetive

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negative

impact on his

developement

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development

of moralities and

problem solving

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capabilities.

Nevertheless

, sometimes

friends

can be a drawback

for

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developing

self confidence

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. In Conclusion, I

am

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totally

agreed

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with the notion that

people

have to move away to get a job to boost enough

self confidance

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self-confidence

and strong moralities inside them as the advantages of

this

practice

are higher than the drawbacks it has.