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The table below depicts the average number of hours per day that visitors from Australia, India, Canada, and Germany spent doing leisure activities while vacationing in Italy in December 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table illustrates how many
hours
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 tourists from Australia, Canada, India and Germany spent each day in Italy for activities encompassing the beach, Historical
Monuments
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, National Park and
Museum
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 in December 2021.
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, Historical
Monuments
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 was the most popular place to spend leisure time,
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 the
Museum
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 stood
last
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 during the given period. Significantly, Indians surpassed visitors from other countries in exploring the places. It is clear from the table, the Australians utilized 8
hours
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 per day in the Historical
Monuments
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 followed by National Park (6hrs), at the beach(2hrs) and the
Museum
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 (1hr) in the recorded period.
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, Indians and Canadians spent most of their leisure time in Historical
Monuments
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every 6
hours
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 per day. Simultaneously, India and Canada spent equal
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 in all activities except in the
Museum
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 where India consumed 3
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 and Canada 1 hour, respectively.
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 the majority of their vacation time in Historical
Monuments
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(7
hours
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) and least in the Museums ( 2
hours
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) during the same period.

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