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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below depicts the average number of hours per day that visitors from Australia, India, Canada, and Germany spent doing leisure activities while vacationing in Italy in December 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below depicts the average number of hours per day that visitors from Australia, India, Canada, and Germany spent doing leisure activities while vacationing in Italy in December 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The table illustrates how many
hours
 tourists from Australia, Canada, India and Germany spent each day in Italy for activities encompassing the beach, Historical
Monuments
, National Park and
Museum
 in December 2021.
Overall
, Historical
Monuments
 was the most popular place to spend leisure time,
whereas
 the
Museum
 stood
last
 during the given period. Significantly, Indians surpassed visitors from other countries in exploring the places. It is clear from the table, the Australians utilized 8
hours
 per day in the Historical
Monuments
 followed by National Park (6hrs), at the beach(2hrs) and the
Museum
 (1hr) in the recorded period.
Moreover
, Indians and Canadians spent most of their leisure time in Historical
Monuments
by
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every 6
hours
 per day. Simultaneously, India and Canada spent equal
hours
 in all activities except in the
Museum
 where India consumed 3
hours
 and Canada 1 hour, respectively.
According to
 the table, Germans
used
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 the majority of their vacation time in Historical
Monuments
(7
hours
) and least in the Museums ( 2
hours
) during the same period.
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