The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The line graph illustrates the percentage of Australian

exports

to four different countries (

Japan

, United States,

China

and India) from 1990 to 2010. In general, the

number

of

exports

to

China

and India

increase

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increases

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throughout the

years

,

whereas

decrease

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decreased

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for

Japan

and US. The

number

of Australian

exports

to

Japan

started high with over 25% in 1990 before it slumped to 20% in 1995. The

number

remained

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fell slowly over the

years

until reached less than 20% in 2012.

Similarly

, the export to US started

around

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at around

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12% in 1990 and declined sharply

nearly

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to nearly

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10% in 1995 before

it

Correct pronoun usage

they

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increase

Wrong verb form

increased

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like before in 2000 and dropped significantly to around 6% in 2012.

In contrast

, the

number

of Australian

exports

to

China

and

Japan

shows a significant increase over the

years

. India started with approximately 2% in 1990 and levelled off until 2000.

Th

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The

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enumber

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number

slowly rose throughout the

years

until nearly 7% in 2010 before it slowly

decline

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declined

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to 6% in 2012. Meanwhile,

China

shows a constant

increased

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increase

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in the

number

of

exports

. Started from around 3% in 1990 and slowly increased to 5% in 2000 before it soared until

reach

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reaching

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it

peaks

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peak

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of 30% in 2012.