The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of females who were going into higher education in 5 nations- the UK, the USA,
Canada
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, Japan, and Germany in 1970 and 2005.
Overall
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, what stands out from the chart is that
Canada
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and the UK had the highest percentage of women
whereas
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Japan saw the lowest proportion among the five countries in 2005.
Moreover
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, all the countries except
Canada
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witnessed a rise in the proportion of females. In 1970, the rate of female school-leavers in
Canada
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was the highest, which was 60%, remaining stable in 2005.
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, the UK saw a significant increase from 35% in 1970 to 60% in 2005.
Although
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the rate in Japan was the lowest among these 5 nations, the rate was doubled, reaching 40% in 2005 from 20% in 1970. The percentage in the USA climbed by approximately 23% from 35% in 1970
while
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Germany experienced a subtle change of around 5%, reaching nearly 55% in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment rate
  • percentage
  • decade
  • increase/decrease
  • compare/contrast
  • significant
  • socio-economic factors
  • progressive
  • minimal changes
  • hypothesize
  • global developments
  • regional developments
  • influence
  • trend analysis
  • workforce participation
  • historical context
  • labor market
  • gender gap
  • employment policies
  • cultural norms
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