The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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These two diagrams regard the
cement
-making process and the concrete production using Use synonyms
cement
for building purposes.
As you can observe, in the Use synonyms
cement
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production’s
diagram, there are Change noun form
production
few
steps that permit to Correct article usage
a few
collect
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collection
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cement
in many bags. First of all, limestone and clay have to be Change preposition
of cement
positionated
in a crusher which permits Correct your spelling
positioned
to get
the powder. Verb problem
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This
powder has to pass between a mixer and a rotating heater. Linking Words
Then
, the result has to be Linking Words
grinded
to get the final product, the Correct your spelling
ground
cement
. Use synonyms
At the end
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this
process, the amount of Linking Words
cement
has to be put in many bags for collecting and Use synonyms
trasporting
.
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transporting
Regarding the
concrete production, Change preposition
The
it
is a mix of many products that are necessary to be put in a concrete mixer. Correct pronoun usage
apply
For getting
the final result, the products’ quantities have to be very accurate.
There must be 15% of Change preposition
To get
cement
, 25% of sand, 10% of water and 50% of gravel.Use synonyms
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