The table shows the population ratio of females per 100 males in six different areas in 1995 and 2005. (Africa, Asia, Europe, North America, Central America and Oceania). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table compares data about how many women per 100 men lived on 6 various continents at
2 points in time namely, 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, it was important that the number of females per 100 males in all areas other than Africa and Europe reduced.
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the graph, in Asia, the main continent where women were more than in other regions, composed 105.3 in 1995; Linking Words
thereafter
, it declined to 104.9 in 2005. the second one was Oceania, which formed 103.9 in the start; Linking Words
then
it fell to 99.8 in 2005. Both North and Central America roughly made up the same number at 100 in 1995 after that, they like the prior continents decreased to 97.5 for Central America and 96.9 for North America.
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in contrast
to the other areas in Africa and in Europe, Linking Words
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figure climbed. in Africa rose from 97.8 in 1995 to nearly the same figure as in Oceania in 2005; Linking Words
furthermore
, in Europe constituted 89.4 in the beginning; Linking Words
thereafter
, it increased to 92.8 in 2005.Linking Words
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