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You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter tell them when you will be arriving and leaving explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel

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Dear sir, I am inscribing
this
 missive to request you to manage my booking at
you
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your
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 resort for the
last
 weekend of November. We are arriving on Friday evening around 6'o
clock
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o'clock
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 and we would like to book
hotel
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a hotel
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 shuttle service for arriving from the airport to
resort
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the resort
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.
check-out
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Check-out
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 will be made by us on
the sunday afternoon
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a sunday afternoon
sunday afternoon
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.I want a room for
the
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apply
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6 people and we would prefer
twin
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a twin
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 room with four beds and
beach
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a beach
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 view. There are four adults and two children below thirteen. I would like to include a breakfast buffet and swimming pool access. what will be
charges
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the charges
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of
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for
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 everything including all the extra facilities
.
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Iwould
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I would
 like to know if any events are organized by your side on
the Saturday night
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a Saturday night
Saturday night
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 or anywhere nearby. can you please tell me about the popular restaurants in the area and any type of discounts available on them
.
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 Looking forward to hearing from you soon
and
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apply
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please send me
copy
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 of the receipt as I will pay for everything online. Yours Faithfully, Simranjot Kaur
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coherence cohesion
Make sure to capitalize 'you,' 'I,' and the beginning of sentences for better formality and clarity.
task achievement
Consider elaborating slightly on the types of activities or events you are interested in, to provide a complete response.
task achievement
The letter clearly states the arrival and departure times, which showcases good task achievement.
task achievement
The request for specific room types and additional facilities is well-articulated, indicating a thorough response to the task.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Accommodation
  • Arrival and departure
  • Sea view
  • Family suite
  • Cost estimate
  • Activities and amenities
  • Water sports
  • Cultural sites
  • Natural attractions
  • Places of interest
  • Confirmation of booking
  • Warm regards
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