The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries; China and India. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The graphs depict the average
of
global Change preposition
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food
consumption
of four categories, which were compared to China and India in 2008. Overall
, world consumption
differed with
both countries, even though processed Change preposition
in
food
comprised the majority of the preferences in all three charts.
Processed diets represented a substantial portion of worldwide consumption
by
41% in total, followed by vegetables and fruits Change preposition
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with
29% and animal Change preposition
at
food
at 3% lower. In the international, nuts and seeds being
the smallest alternative Wrong verb form
are
diets
only 4%.
Fix the agreement mistake
diet
Similarly
, in
India had the greatest Change preposition
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consumption
cooked
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of cooked
food
at 39%, trailed by animal protein at 25%, which also
shared similar value with global percentages. Greens and crops were used to rate for 23% while
nuts and seeds accounted for less than half of the total.
In china
, both cooked meals and plant-based Capitalize word
China
food
were consumed the most in 2008. In this
nation, edible seeds became the largest utilized, making up 19% of the three charts presented at the time.Submitted by nineband9s on
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