The table provides comparison of the expenditure rate of the government on education amd training and participation rate of 18-24 years olds in the same in five nations in 2002.

The table provides comparison of the expenditure rate of the government on education amd training and participation rate of 18-24 years olds in the same in five nations in 2002.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table provides comparison of the expenditure rate of the government on education amd training and participation rate of 18-24 years olds in the same in five nations in 2002.
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table compares the educational attainment and participation rates of 18-
24 year olds
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24-year-olds
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in 2002 in every fifth
country
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. In
general
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general,
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it can be seen that five countries were at
variety
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a variety
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of rates
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Poland
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had the lowest
expedenture
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expenditure
rate
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Slovenia had the highest
Poland
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had the highest participation among others and Romania had the lowest
rate
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. Slovenia was the highest
country
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on
expedenture
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expenditure
rate
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at 25
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percent
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and the lowest one was
Czech
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the Czech
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Republic at just 9
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percent
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. Hungary and Romania countries were similar at 13% and 10 % respectively.
Poland
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was just 5
percent
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. Regarding to
rate
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of participation the lowest
country
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was Romania at 23%. The biggest
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percent
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country
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was
Poland
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at 44%.Czech Republic at 27
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.
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contrast
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the
last
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one was Hungary at 34
percent
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words country, poland, rate, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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