The given below pie chart shows the cultural and leisure Activities amongst boys’ and girls’. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The two given pie charts compare the participation of
boys
and Use synonyms
girls
in some chosen Use synonyms
activites
.Correct your spelling
activities
This
data is based on Linking Words
percentage
.
Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
Overall
, Linking Words
It is clear that
how Linking Words
girls
are far Use synonyms
much
fascinated by reading and dancing than Rephrase
more
boys
, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
boys
are less interested Use synonyms
in
. Indeed, they are really into Correct pronoun usage
in it
comuter
games.
Correct your spelling
computer
According to
Linking Words
pie
charts, Both groups Correct article usage
the pie
are
participated in listening to music in the same amount which is 10 per Unnecessary verb
apply
cent
. Regarding sports, Use synonyms
boys
Use synonyms
join
in basketball, skateboarding, and soccer which Wrong verb form
joined
are
26, 17, Change the verb form
is
11
per Correct word choice
and 11
cent
respectively, Use synonyms
girls
Use synonyms
on the other hand
, are joined in Linking Words
gemnastics
and netball more than other activities, the share of Correct your spelling
gymnastics
former
is 11 per Correct article usage
the former
cent
, and the latter is 15 per Use synonyms
cent
. Dancing is the most popular activity among Use synonyms
grils
Correct your spelling
girls
to
27%, Change preposition
apply
while
the contribution of Linking Words
boys
is none.
Regarding reading, Use synonyms
Although
Linking Words
girls
are interested in reading to 21%, only 2% of Use synonyms
boys
choose Use synonyms
this
activity. Linking Words
However
, they are more fascinated by computer Linking Words
game
to 34 per Fix the agreement mistake
games
cent
, which is 16 per Use synonyms
cent
that of Use synonyms
girls
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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