The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.) Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.

The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.) Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.
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The bar chart illustrates the average proportion of the
hours
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of work which are not paid every week, for three different categories, broken down by gender.
Overall
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, significantly more unpaid responsibilities,
such
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as childcare in the home, housework, and gardening, are performed by females,
while
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the percentage of
hours
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for males is much lower.
It is clear that
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the number of
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that are done for free is increasing for bigger families among women,
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for men it is nearly the same for all groups. Focusing first on married women, approximately 30
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are spent working without any wage by those who do not have
children
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,
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for females having 1 or 2
children
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, the corresponding figure is more than 20
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higher. When it comes to the third category, with 3 or more
children
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, they are the leaders, working for free for almost 60
hours
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weekly. As for the men, for those without offspring, the percentage of
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of unpaid work for
this
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category is less than 20. Notably, for males with 1 or 2
children
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, the figure remains nearly the same,
while
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for fathers with 3 or more
children
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, it drops slightly, to approximately 15
hours
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, children with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • unpaid work
  • categories
  • average hours
  • men
  • women
  • comparison
  • overview
  • highest
  • differences
  • reasons
  • childcare
  • housework
  • gardening
  • gender roles
  • societal expectations
  • cultural norms
  • work-life balance
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