Task 1: The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Task 1: The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The chart illustrates the
value
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of one country's exports in various
categories
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during 2015 and 2016. The table illustrates a change in the percentage of each
category
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of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. The
value
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of petroleum products, engineered goods, textiles, and agricultural products experienced an increase in export earnings in the year 2016. In 2015, these four
categories
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were valued at approximately 61, 58, 26, and 31
billion
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dollars
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respectively,
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in 2016, all four of those
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increased by around 2, 3, 6, and 1
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dollars
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respectively. The percentage
value
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also
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increased by 3%, 8.5%, 15.24%, and 0.81% respectively in 2016.
On the other hand
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, the gems and jewellery
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experienced a decrease in export earnings in 2016 compared to 2015. In 2015,
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category
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earned approximately 43
billion
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dollars
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.
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in 2016 it decreased to 40
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dollars
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.
This
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category
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also
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experienced a decrease in
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percentage at 5.18%. In conclusion, all
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except for the gems and jewellery
category
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experienced an increase in both export earnings and values in the year 2016.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words value, categories, category, billion, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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