The line graph shows value changes in the UK steel industry between 1970 and 2000, while the second line chart shows employment status in the same industry.
The
given
two line graphs illustrate the Verb problem
apply
value
changes in the steel
industry
of the UK between 1970 and 2000, and the employment status of the same industry
.
Overall
, the production
and demand for steel
decreased and the import of steel
increased. The employment status of the steel
industry
experienced a decrease
.
In the first line graph, the total demand for steel
was 2000000 in the year
1970, and after that, it experienced a decrease
throughout the period. In the year
1990, the demand for steel
experienced a gradual decrease
and reached around 11000000. Meanwhile, in 1970, the production
value
of steel
was around 17000000. After that, the production
value
encountered a sharp decrease
, and in 1990, the production
value
was around 9000000. However
, the import value
of steel
was around 1000 in the year
in the year
1970, and it increased by up to 4000000 in the year
1980. The import reached 8000000 in 2000.
In the second line graph, in the year
1970, the employment status of the steel
industry
was around 50000, and it showed a gradual decrease
throughout the period. In the year
1990, it reached around 20000.Submitted by rahman_rehana on
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