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The bar chart below shows the top tem countries for the production and consumption of rice in 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top tem countries for the production and consumption of rice in 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph provided above gives information about ten
countries
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 with the highest amount of
production
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 and
consumption
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 of
rice
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 in 2020.
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generally
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generally,
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 the cultivation of all
countries
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were
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 slightly more than their
consumptoins
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consumption
consumptions
, except for two
countries
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;
Germany
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 and Russia. In the case of
Germany
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, they used nearly 50
billion
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kWh
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 more
rice
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, its
consumption
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 was 582.5
billion
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kWh
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.
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,
although
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 Russian
production
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 was equal to its
consumption
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, nearly 1050
billion
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kWh
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, Compared to
Germany
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, its
production
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 and
consumption
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 was double. By eliminating
Germany
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, the four
countries
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at the end
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 of the list, Korea, Rep., Brazil, France, and Canada, had
the
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apply
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production
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osscilating
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oscillating
 around 500 to 600
billions
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billion
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kWh
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, and their consumptions varied between 450 to 550. Turning our attention to the
countreis
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countries
 with the highest amount of output and
consumtion
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consumption
; China was the first country with the most significant
production
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; 5398
billion
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kWh
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. And its
consumption
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 was almost 50kWh less than that of output. Followed by
United
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the United
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 States,
This
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countrie
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country
countries
 had the second position
in
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on
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 the list. In comparison to China, Americans ate remarkably less
rice
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, with 4100
billion
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kWh
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production
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 and 3866
billion
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kWh
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consumption
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. Japan and India stood after Russia, with
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production
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the production
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 of 936 for Japan and 871 for India, people ate 856
kWh
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 and 698
kWh
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rice
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of rice
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 in those
countries
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 respectively.
Overall
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, China and
United
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the United
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 States were the biggest producers of
rice
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, and they were the greatest consumers.
Furthurmore
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Furthermore
, in
Germany
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 and France,
consumption
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 was more than cultivation.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, production, consumption, rice, germany, billion, kwh with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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