The bar chart below shows the top tem countries for the production and consumption of rice in 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph provided above gives information about ten
countries
with the highest amount of production
and consumption
of rice
in 2020.
To begin
with, generally
the cultivation of all Add a comma
generally,
countries
were
slightly more than their Change the verb form
was
consumptoins
, except for two Correct your spelling
consumption
consumptions
countries
; Germany
and Russia. In the case of Germany
, they used nearly 50 billion
kWh
more rice
, its consumption
was 582.5 billion
kWh
. In addition
,although
Russian production
was equal to its consumption
, nearly 1050 billion
kWh
, Compared to Germany
, its production
and consumption
was double. By eliminating Germany
, the four countries
at the end
of the list, Korea, Rep., Brazil, France, and Canada, had the
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production
osscilating
around 500 to 600 Correct your spelling
oscillating
billions
Change to singular
billion
kWh
, and their consumptions varied between 450 to 550.
Turning our attention to the countreis
with the highest amount of output and Correct your spelling
countries
consumtion
; China was the first country with the most significant Correct your spelling
consumption
production
; 5398 billion
kWh
. And its consumption
was almost 50kWh less than that of output. Followed by United
States, Correct article usage
the United
This
countrie
had the second position Correct your spelling
country
countries
in
the list. In comparison to China, Americans ate remarkably less Change preposition
on
rice
, with 4100 billion
kWh
production
and 3866 billion
kWh
consumption
. Japan and India stood after Russia, with production
of 936 for Japan and 871 for India, people ate 856 Add an article
the production
a production
kWh
and 698 kWh
rice
in those Change preposition
of rice
countries
respectively.
Overall
, China and United
States were the biggest producers of Correct article usage
the United
rice
, and they were the greatest consumers. Furthurmore
, in Correct your spelling
Furthermore
Germany
and France, consumption
was more than cultivation.Submitted by faraisam33 on
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