The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows the cost of several categories of one country’s exports from 2015 to 2016,
while
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the table depicts the shift in the percentage of every type of
export
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2016 in comparison with 2015. The bar chart illustrates
export
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income in billions of dollars in 2015-2016. The biggest profits were earned by the
export
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of petroleum
products
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in both years with almost the same amount of money (60
billion
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and around 60 respectively). The sale of engineered goods generated approximately equal revenue with 57
billion
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dollars in 2015 compared to 61
billion
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dollars in 2016.
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the first two categories were relatively valuable, gems and
jewellery
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as items to
export
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had a maximum of 42
billion
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in 2015 and just 40
billion
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the following year. Agricultural
products
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were even less
as
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jewellery
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with a total income of 30-31
billion
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in 2015 and 31-32
billion
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in 2016. The least profitable category was textiles in both years – 26
billion
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in 2015 and 31-32
billion
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the year after. The table indicates the
change
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in the percentage of categories through 2015-2016. The biggest and the most positive improvement is the shift in textiles
export
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which increased by 15.24% from 2015 to 2016. The second largest
change
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was in engineered goods (8.5% upward). The
export
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of gems and
jewellery
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decreased by 5.18 percentage points. Petroleum
products
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had a slight
change
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with 3% upward,
while
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agricultural
products
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almost did not
change
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(only 0.81% downward). 
Overall
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, both the pie chart and the table show
the
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positive trends in exporting petroleum
products
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,
engineered
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engineering
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goods and textiles with downward trends in supplying
with
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apply
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jewellery
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and agricultural
products
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words export, products, billion, jewellery, change with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • economic sector
  • percentage change
  • increment
  • decrement
  • fluctuation
  • trend analysis
  • year-on-year comparison
  • significant growth/decline
  • stagnation
  • market dynamics
  • fiscal repercussions
  • trade balance
  • competitive advantage
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