The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows the cost of several categories of one country’s exports from 2015 to 2016,
while
the table depicts the shift in the percentage of every type of Linking Words
export
Use synonyms
of
2016 in comparison with 2015.
The bar chart illustrates Change preposition
in
export
income in billions of dollars in 2015-2016. The biggest profits were earned by the Use synonyms
export
of petroleum Use synonyms
products
in both years with almost the same amount of money (60 Use synonyms
billion
and around 60 respectively). The sale of engineered goods generated approximately equal revenue with 57 Use synonyms
billion
dollars in 2015 compared to 61 Use synonyms
billion
dollars in 2016. Use synonyms
While
the first two categories were relatively valuable, gems and Linking Words
jewellery
as items to Use synonyms
export
had a maximum of 42 Use synonyms
billion
in 2015 and just 40 Use synonyms
billion
the following year. Agricultural Use synonyms
products
were even less Use synonyms
as
Change preposition
than
jewellery
with a total income of 30-31 Use synonyms
billion
in 2015 and 31-32 Use synonyms
billion
in 2016. The least profitable category was textiles in both years – 26 Use synonyms
billion
in 2015 and 31-32 Use synonyms
billion
the year after.
The table indicates the Use synonyms
change
in the percentage of categories through 2015-2016. The biggest and the most positive improvement is the shift in textiles Use synonyms
export
which increased by 15.24% from 2015 to 2016. The second largest Use synonyms
change
was in engineered goods (8.5% upward). The Use synonyms
export
of gems and Use synonyms
jewellery
decreased by 5.18 percentage points. Petroleum Use synonyms
products
had a slight Use synonyms
change
with 3% upward, Use synonyms
while
agricultural Linking Words
products
almost did not Use synonyms
change
(only 0.81% downward).
Use synonyms
Overall
, both the pie chart and the table show Linking Words
the
positive trends in exporting petroleum Correct article usage
apply
products
, Use synonyms
engineered
goods and textiles with downward trends in supplying Change the form of the verb
engineering
with
Change preposition
apply
jewellery
and agricultural Use synonyms
products
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words export, products, billion, jewellery, change with synonyms.
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