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The graphs below show four categories of citrus fruits and the top three countries to which these were exported (in thousand tonnes) in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show four categories of citrus fruits and the top three countries to which these were exported (in thousand tonnes) in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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the bar chart illustrates the export of citrus fruits
such
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 as
oranges
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 lemons
grapefruits
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 and other fruits. in different countries in 2012. the units are measured in thousand
tonnes
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.
Overall
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, Mexico is the top country in
oranges
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 and other fruits.
Also
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,
oranges
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 were higher in South Africa and
grapefruits
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 were increased in Turkey. all categories have the same stability. As can be seen from the graph, people who prefer
oranges
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 in South Africa led to 1000
tonnes
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.
While
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 the United States was unfavourable about 300
tonnes
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. lemon was increased in Mexico by about 500
tonnes
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.
In contrast
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, Argentina decreased by nearly 150
tonnes
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.
also
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, the purchase of
grapefruits
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 at 400
tonnes
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 by Turkey.
However
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, the United States declined to around 200
tonnes
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.Mexico went up in other ruites about 500
tonnes
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 compared with other countries.
In addition
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, in the United
States
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States,
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 lemons and
grapefruits
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 both have similar rates at 200
tonnes
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oranges, grapefruits, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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