The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table above depicts the consumption in four different countries by people.
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, there are three basic meals, Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
what
, Correct your spelling
wheat
maize
, and Use synonyms
rice
. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen that the highest consumption in Linking Words
Cambodi
is Correct your spelling
Cambodia
rice
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while
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Poland
and Egypt more consume in Change preposition
in Poland
wheat
than Use synonyms
rice
and Use synonyms
maize
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On the other hand
, Mexico Linking Words
is consume
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consumes
maize
than other basic foods.
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First,
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Cambodi
is consuming Correct your spelling
Cambodia
rice
as much as 1445 Use synonyms
calories
. Following that, the citizen only Use synonyms
consume
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consumes
maize
is about 103 and Use synonyms
wheat
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has
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is
in
their basic foods. Change preposition
of
Furthermore
, Poland is not eating Linking Words
maize
at all. Meanwhile, the total Use synonyms
calories
that they are eating in Use synonyms
wheat
is approximately 865. On the other side, Use synonyms
rice
has a tiny portion, which is just around 19 Use synonyms
calories
.
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Moreover
, the total average of Egypt that Linking Words
eat
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eats
wheat
is 1095 Use synonyms
calories
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However
, they only eat Linking Words
rice
and Use synonyms
maize
as much as 501 and 578, respectively. Use synonyms
Last
country, Linking Words
maize
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becomes
the most basic meal that people in Mexico Wrong verb form
became
is
consume. Meantime, Unnecessary verb
apply
rice
becomes the least cuisine and Use synonyms
wheat
becomes the second one with 275 Use synonyms
calories
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words maize, rice, wheat, calories with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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