The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000.
The line graph provides data about the creation of paper,wood pulp and saun-wood in the UK between 1980 to 2000.
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while
paper products started growing,lumber decreased,in two decades.
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To begin
with,in 1980 the indicator of packaging was about 230 Linking Words
million
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tonnes
,after one decade it grew a little to 250 Use synonyms
tonnes
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in 2000 the figure rose sharply to 350 Linking Words
tonnes
.
Boards in 1980 were just 200,Use synonyms
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, it dropped to 50 Linking Words
million
less 150 Use synonyms
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it fell Linking Words
further
to just over 100 Linking Words
million
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tonnes
in 2000.
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product of the forest industry in the UK was pulp wood.In 1980 it was just under 200 and dropped to 150 Linking Words
million
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tonnes
in 1990,Use synonyms
also
started to grow a little in the 2000s to just under 150 Linking Words
million
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tonnes
.
In summary, the line graph shows how many Use synonyms
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of products were used in two decadesUse synonyms
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