The graphs below show the trends in three boys and girls names which are currently in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The picture provided above depicts two line graphs illustrating the most widespread three

names

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among UK children based on their genders between 1925 and 2000.

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, For boys, Daniel was the most

favorite

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name

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among English parents over the

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, starting at 4 per

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, it reached 12 per

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in 1975, following a moderate reduction

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, both Danial and Oliver had the highest frequency

at the end

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, nearly 10 per

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Moreover

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although

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the

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Oliver rose to over five in

year

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the year

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1950, and

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sudenly

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suddenly

plummeted to zero after a quarter of

century

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a century

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, it soared and exceeded the frequency of Alexander in 1980. Keeping its growing trend until the end of

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period

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, it hit a maximum

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eleven per

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less

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fewer

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English parents named their sons Alexander until 1975, it

experince

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experience

experienced

an invariant trend around one boy with

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name

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amoung

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among

1000.

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an increasing number of boys were named Alexander, and

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of the

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, it

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almost 9 per

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. Turning our attention to other

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genders'

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names

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, Sophia and Isabella were

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unfamous that no couple called their girls by these

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until 1975, but both

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name's

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trends

experinced

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experienced

a rapid rise to stop at

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approximately

ten per

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year

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2000.

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, compared to the aforementioned

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among girls, people liked Emily more; almost 0.001 per cent of little girls were named Emilly by 1950 when the frequency of Emily

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started

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to rise

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, it kept its upward trend until 1975, and it skyrocketed during the

last

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25 year, it ended up at 11 per

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Overall

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, most

names

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were not attractive for a long

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, but more and more English parents have become interested in those

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words names, name, period, thousand with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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11
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

288 words

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The graphs below show the trends in three boys and girls names which are currently in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Online education is becoming increasingly popular. many students are choosing to study online instead of face-to-face education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach?

Some people say that the only way to get success is to go to universities while others think that it depends on other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?