You wish to apply for a new college course, but you are unsure about the details of cost, duration and subjects posted on the college website. Write an email to the relevant person in admissions at the college, asking them to clarify these points for you. In this email, Say what your interest is Explain why the website is unclear Request the information that you need Begin your letter ‘Dear --------’

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Dear sir, I hope you are doing well, I am writing
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letter concerning some information related to the
course
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I wanted to pursue that
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am not clear about via online sites. Actually,
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am interested
to take
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in taking
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a business administration diploma
course
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in
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at
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this
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university, as I have recently done my high school studies. I was looking
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subjects that are related to
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course
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, but I was not able to locate
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through
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the website.
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, I was looking for the duration of the
course
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as it shows me 3 years on the website, but my friend who has done the same
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said it is
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a 2-year
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diploma.
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, I wanted to know the
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amount of cost that I need to pay first to book a seat and how much for each semester. It would be really appreciated if I get
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information through an email or my contact information that
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already provided on the official site of the college. I hope to hear from you soon. yours sincerely, Sukhjit Kaur
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writing style
Ensure consistent capitalization, such as the word 'i' should be 'I'.
clarity
Be more specific and concise about your queries to make them clearer.
tone
The letter has a polite and respectful tone, showing professionalism.
clarity
The email starts with a clear statement of interest and follows with specific questions, indicating the main purpose effectively.
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