You wish to apply for a new college course, but you are unsure about the details of cost, duration and subjects posted on the college website. Write an email to the relevant person in admissions at the college, asking them to clarify these points for you. In this email, Say what your interest is Explain why the website is unclear Request the information that you need Begin your letter ‘Dear --------’

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Dear sir, I hope you are doing well, I am writing

this

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letter concerning some information related to the

course

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I wanted to pursue that

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am not clear about via online sites. Actually,

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am interested

to take

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in taking

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a business administration diploma

course

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this

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university, as I have recently done my high school studies. I was looking

the

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for the

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subjects that are related to

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course

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, but I was not able to locate

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them

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through

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the website.

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, I was looking for the duration of the

course

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as it shows me 3 years on the website, but my friend who has done the same

course

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said it is

2-year

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a 2-year

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diploma.

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, I wanted to know the

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amount of cost that I need to pay first to book a seat and how much for each semester. It would be really appreciated if I get

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information through an email or my contact information that

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already provided on the official site of the college. I hope to hear from you soon. yours sincerely, Sukhjit Kaur

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writing style

Ensure consistent capitalization, such as the word 'i' should be 'I'.

clarity

Be more specific and concise about your queries to make them clearer.

tone

The letter has a polite and respectful tone, showing professionalism.

clarity

The email starts with a clear statement of interest and follows with specific questions, indicating the main purpose effectively.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

176 words

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