The given line chart delineates the proportion of Australian exports with four different nations, namely Japan, The US, China and India, from 1990 to 2012.
The line chart depicts the rating of
Australian
exports with 4 countries that are Japan
, The US, China
and India.
Overall
, it is crystal clear that China
became during these 22 years the prime partner for China
, overgoing Japan
and the US.
Firstly
, it is noticeable that Japan
used to be the first destination for Australian
goods in 1990, accounting for almost 25% of the total exports.The US had followed the aforementioned nation with more than 10%.Furthermore
, China
and India were respectively rated in the 3rd and last
position, representing less than 5% of the total Australian
sales. However
, the trend changed dramatically, consequentially for China
. Indeed, the Asian state became the first Australian's
collaborator, witnessing a terrific surge which is from about 30% in 2012.Concerning Change noun form
Australian
Japan
, its contribution decreased, passing from approximately 25% in 1990 to less than 20% in 2012.Moreover
, analysing The US involvement in the Australian
economy,a fluctuation can be highlighted during this
time span, ending with a decrease beneath 10%.Finally
, India remained the last
partner to Australia. In fact, despite an increase until 2009,its proportion plummeted until 2012.Submitted by namoisma on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australian, japan, china with synonyms.
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