The given line chart delineates the proportion of Australian exports with four different nations, namely Japan, The US, China and India, from 1990 to 2012.

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The line chart depicts the rating of

Australian

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exports with 4 countries that are

Japan

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, The US,

China

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and India.

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, it is crystal clear that

China

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became during these 22 years the prime partner for

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, overgoing

Japan

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and the US.

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, it is noticeable that

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used to be the first destination for

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goods in 1990, accounting for almost 25% of the total exports.The US had followed the aforementioned nation with more than 10%.

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China

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and India were respectively rated in the 3rd and

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position, representing less than 5% of the total

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sales.

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, the trend changed dramatically, consequentially for

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. Indeed, the Asian state became the first

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Australian's

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collaborator, witnessing a terrific surge which is from about 30% in 2012.Concerning

Japan

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, its contribution decreased, passing from approximately 25% in 1990 to less than 20% in 2012.

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, analysing The US involvement in the

Australian

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economy,a fluctuation can be highlighted during

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time span, ending with a decrease beneath 10%.

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, India remained the

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partner to Australia. In fact, despite an increase until 2009,its proportion plummeted until 2012.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words australian, japan, china with synonyms.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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