The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph depicts the number of
unemployment
rates
between 1993 and 2007 in the UK
, Japan, and the rest of Europe countries. Overall
, Japanese and the rest of European unemployment
rates
grew from their starting points at the completion of the time presented. The UK
unemployment
rates
, on the other hand
, fell marginally.
Looking in more detail, Japanese rates
of unemployment
accounted for 2 compared to about 9 for EU countries and 11 for the United Kingdom. Although
Japan showed the least
figure, it increased slightly in 1995 and remained stable until 1999 for 3 before Correct word choice
lowest
climbed
in 2003, reaching a peak of 6. After that, they dropped again with the final value of 4, showing the smallest portion between the three regions in the Wrong verb form
climbing
last
year.
In contrast
, the rest of the countries in Europe skyrocketed, surpassing the UK
at nearly 12 in 1997. However
, they continued to fall from 1997 to 2003 before stabilising for 2 years and declining insignificantly the
Change preposition
in the
last
period with just under 8. Despite the UK
become
the highest Verb problem
having
rates
of Fix the agreement mistake
rate
unemployment
in the initial period, they experienced Correct article usage
a gradually
gradually decreased
until 2001, reaching 5 of the total. From 2001 to 2005, they remained stable before increasing Replace the word
gradual decrease
one
point Change preposition
by one
for
6 in 2007.Change preposition
to
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