The graph below shows the changing patterns of access to modern technology in homes in the UK (expressed in percentage terms). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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the amount of changing patterns of access to modern technology

consist

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of CD Player, Mobile

Phone

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, Home

Computter

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Computer

, and Internet Access in homes in the United Kingdom which were used

7

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years from 1996 to 2003.

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are measured in percentage. With regards to the amount of CD

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used, it began at around 60

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and

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peaked at 80

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.

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approximately 20

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of mobile

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was

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used in the first year which fluctuated

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slightly

to 70

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it the

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. On the one hand, the

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of Home Internet access only started in 1998 at about 10

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reached a high of just over 45

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5 years later.

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year Home computer usage until the end of 2003

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stable over the year and only rose

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about 20

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