the figure shows demographic trends in scotland. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The charts illustrate the proportion of population trends in Scotland in three different stages from 1940 to 2020.
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it dipped through these years and in 2020 the proportion of Linking Words
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similar trend in population growth too,it starts from almost 0.8.5 in 1940 but in 2004 Correct determiner usage
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, there was a significant growth from the years of 1945 to 1950.On the other side, the mortality ratio started nearly at 1.5% and the Linking Words
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process was downward but in two decades from 1990 to 2010 the rate remained the same and after that, until 2020 it climbed greatly.Linking Words
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, it will be likely to rise minimally from 2020 to now.Linking Words
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