The pie chart below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in the UK in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie chart gives information about the percentage of

households

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types in poverty in the United Kingdom in the year 2002.

Overall

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, the pie chart Illustrates many fractions

that

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apply

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namely : single and persons , aged

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couple

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couples

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, single without

children

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couple

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couples

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without

children

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, sole partners ,

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couple

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couples

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with

children

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and all households. It

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apply

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can be observed that the highest percentage was sole parents

while

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the

lostest

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lowest

popular was an aged

couple

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. Generally speaking, the proportion of sole reaching the higher proportion

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just above a one quarter.

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, the single without

children

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made up just under one quarter .

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couple

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couples

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with

children

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has

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been taking 15 %

while

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, all households

was

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were

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approximately 15 per

cen

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cent

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The

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couple

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without

children

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and single aged persons

they

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apply

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made up 9% and 7% respectively. The minor percentage was an aged

couple

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it saw just under one of ten .

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words couple, children with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

153 words

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