Methods of transporation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the UK. The two pie charts compare five categories of UK travelling percentage of university (train, bicycle, bus, walking, car,) from 2004 to 2009) Units are measured in proportion. af

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proportion

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of a variety of methods of movement to

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university for either work or education in the UK in the years 2004 and 2009.

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, it is noticeable that cars and

buses

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were the primary mode of

transporation

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transportation

in both years,

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people used

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trains to go to university.

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, we can see that the

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of

buses

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experienced a significant rise,

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there was a dramatic decrease in the usage of cars over the given period. First of all, in 2004, the way

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getting to the university by car consisted of 51%, which was the main method of travel to the educational institution

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to the train and walking, which were used only by a small number of people, showing just 3% and 4% respectively. Meanwhile, the

buses

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took second place with 33% of use,

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the

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of bicycles experienced only 9% in the same year. In 2009, there

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a significant sensation, where the

proportion

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of travelling by cars decreased dramatically, almost by two times, to 28%, and the percentage of used

buses

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increased noticeably from 33% to 46%, obtaining the main way of

transporation

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transportation

. Regarding others, there were slight rises in trains' and

walkings

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walking

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proportions by 1% and 2% respectively,

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the bicycle method experienced a slight rise of 8%.