The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph demonstrates the quantity of
oil
that was produced and consumed by China
between 1982 and 2006. Overall
, China
changed from having oil
in surplus to being a heavy consumer, as it expanded its manufacturing roles.
Earlier in the
1965, roughly Change the article
apply
China
used the same amount of oil
that it produced at 2 Millions
Replace the word
Million
of
barrels per day. Change preposition
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However
, oil
extraction continued to increase until it reached a plateau around 1975 which was hovering around 3 million gallons a day.
On the other hand
, oil
usage remained unchanged for 10 years following the surge in the amount of barrels. This
spike kept on increasing rapidly and it served as a catalyst for the growth of the economy China
needed to play the vital role it is playing nowadays.
To summarize, as China
took more initiative steps, its demand for raw materials shifted dramatically in 1995. Nevertheless
, raw materials can not be harvested at any faster rate which stayed the same for the past 50 years.Submitted by tareq.kj on
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