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The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and mnake comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and mnake comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the export earnings of a country across five categories in 2015 and 2016,
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 the table presents the percentage changes in these values.
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, most categories experienced growth, with textiles showing the highest increase,
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 gems and jewellery saw a decline. Petroleum products and engineered goods remained the highest contributors to export earnings. In detail, petroleum products earned around $60
billion
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 in both years, with a 3% increase in 2016. Engineered goods
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 grew significantly, rising by 8.5%, from approximately $58
billion
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 to over $62
billion
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.
In contrast
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, gems and jewellery dropped by 5.18%, decreasing from around $42
billion
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 to $40
billion
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. Agricultural products showed
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 growth of 0.81%, remaining close to $32
billion
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. Textiles had the sharpest increase of 15.24%, rising from $25
billion
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 in 2015 to nearly $30
billion
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 in 2016.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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