The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
line graph illustrates the the different kinds of meat and fish consumption in european
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European
country
from 1979 to 2004. It is measured in Fix the agreement mistake
countries
grames
per person in Correct your spelling
grams
week
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a week
the week
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Overall
, beef and lamb can be seen negative trend while
chicken lovers notably increased. Fish consumptions
all over the year got plateaued rate.
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consumption
Initially
, Beef comsumption
sharply declined but it Correct your spelling
consumption
was
reached a peak Unnecessary verb
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250
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of 250
grams
in 1984. choice of lamb gradually dicraseed
which was got lower rate Correct your spelling
decreased
100
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of 100
grams
by 2004. According to
that, beef and lamb both these
meet took Correct determiner usage
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a
less popularity among the individuals .
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people
fish consumption Change noun form
people's
was
plateaued all over the year which was 50 Unnecessary verb
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grams
got person person. On this
data, chicken
was the majority of people's choice because it Add an article
the chicken
was
gradually increased Unnecessary verb
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by 250grams
250grams
. Begging of the year, chicken Correct your spelling
250 grams
consumptioned
150 grames but it was peaked a reach 250 Correct your spelling
consumption
grams
in 2004.Submitted by sihansinethushalani on
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