The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pictures illustrates the
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and equipment used in the
cement
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-making
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and how is it made
cement
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with produce concrete for building purposes
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,we can see two scheme which is used to various produce for receipt
cement
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and concrete.First of all for production
cement
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the
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consist of 10 stages.Beginning with crushing limestone and clay and ending up with receiving bags of
cement
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.
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to obtain concrete,certain materials are required
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as:
cement
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(15%),water(10%),sand(25%),gravel(50%) and concrete mixer.
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,limestone and clay are passed through crusher,resulting in a fine powder.Next
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powder is mixering and heated .Rotating heater assists on
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process
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.With helping grinder we have
cement
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which is put into bags and ready for use In the next stage for production concrete we put 15% of
cement
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together with
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10% of water and 25% of sand
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this
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we put with small stones 50% of gravel.Subsequentlymixering all produce we have concrete.
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