The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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with produce concrete for building purposes
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,we can see two scheme which is used to various produce for receipt Linking Words
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consist of 10 stages.Beginning with crushing limestone and clay and ending up with receiving bags of Use synonyms
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(15%),water(10%),sand(25%),gravel(50%) and concrete mixer.
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,limestone and clay are passed through crusher,resulting in a fine powder.Next Linking Words
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powder is mixering and heated .Rotating heater assists on Linking Words
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.With helping grinder we have Use synonyms
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which is put into bags and ready for use
In the next stage for production concrete we put 15% of Use synonyms
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we put with small stones 50% of gravel.Subsequentlymixering all produce we have concrete.Linking Words
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