The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first diagram illstrustrates the process of producing
cement
and ingredients
required while
the second diagram highlights how to turn cement
into concrete.
The first process of producing cement
is to add limestone and clay into the crusher which turned them into powder form. After that, limestone and clay powder go through a mixer and then
drop to a rotating heater where it turns and heat up the mixture. The heated up cement
mixture will then
go through a grinder which finished cement
is ready to be packed in bags.
In the second diagram, it shows that concrete is created by a combination of four ingredients
, which includes 15% od cement
, 10% of water, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel. All of these ingredients
are added into the concrete mixer and turns into concrete.
Overall
, cement
is produced by limestone and clay, which go through the process of crushing, mixing, heating and grinding. After cement
is made, it is one of the four main ingredients
to be added to create concreate.Submitted by kittycwy on
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