The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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shows the Correct your spelling
diagram
process
of producing Cement
and Concrete, it uses visual information (drawings and arrows) and also
show
the ingredients and tools used in the Change the verb form
shows
process
.
Cement
production is fairly simple, it starts off with a mix of limestone and clay which get crushed into powders,
after the powders go through a mixer to become one humongous powder, the powder goes through a Remove the comma
apply
process
of heating and rotating through a pipe shaped
tool called a Rotating heater, and Add a hyphen
pipe-shaped
then
it gets cooled down and crushed again using a simple grinder, and in the end
it gets bagged in paper or plastic bags.
Concrete production is a cold Add a comma
end,
process
, Which means no heat is used as shown. Concrete is just a mixture of a half part
gravel (small stones), a Add a hyphen
half-part
quarter part
sand, and a Add a hyphen
quarter-part
quarter part
mixture made out of Add a hyphen
quarter-part
cement
and water, these ingredients go through a concrete mixer to make the final cement
mixture.Submitted by miralaltalhi11707 on
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