The charts below show the comparison of time spent, in minutes per day, by UK males and females on household and leisure activities in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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Both data charts give an idea about the amount of
time
that Males and Females living in the UK spend on daily chores and Use synonyms
activities
in the year Use synonyms
of
2008.
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Overall
, the majority of Linking Words
Women
do household work and spend less Use synonyms
time
on fun Use synonyms
activities
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while
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Men
prefer to do more repair work than Use synonyms
houswork
and spend more Correct your spelling
housework
time
on leisure Use synonyms
activities
.
The largest amount of Use synonyms
time
spent doing cooking and washing is done by Use synonyms
Women
in general, at an Use synonyms
avarage
of almost 80 Correct your spelling
average
minutes
per day, Use synonyms
while
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Men
only do around half an hour of the same chores. Shopping and Clothes Use synonyms
maintanance
is Correct your spelling
maintenance
also
mostly done by Linking Words
Women
at around 30 to 35 Use synonyms
minutes
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respectivly
. Correct your spelling
respectively
Men
dominate most of the Use synonyms
handywork
and repair jobs around the house with almost 20 Correct your spelling
handiwork
handy work
minutes
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everyday
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every day
while
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Women
just do 10 Use synonyms
minutes
only.
With the free Use synonyms
time
available, Use synonyms
Men
spend the largest amount of Use synonyms
time
on hobbies and Use synonyms
activities
. Watching the television or listening to the radio is an activity that Males do for 137 Use synonyms
minutes
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everyday
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every day
while
females only Linking Words
doing
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minutes
. Sports are Use synonyms
also
mostly done by Linking Words
men
at 15 Use synonyms
minutes
and 11 Use synonyms
minutes
for Use synonyms
women
. Females are more likely to do reading in their free Use synonyms
time
for almost 20 Use synonyms
minutes
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everyday
, Replace the word
every day
while
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men
do 18 Use synonyms
minutes
which is not a huge difference.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, activities, women, men, minutes with synonyms.
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