The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan

The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan
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The two pie graphs present a comparison of Turkey's economic
contributions
across eight industry sectors between 2000 and 2016.
Overall
, the
contributions
from the construction, manufacturing,
trade
,
utilities
, and
transportation
sectors saw significant growth by 2016.
In contrast
, the
contributions
from agriculture, finance, business, leisure and hospitality, and government experienced notable declines during the same period. Meanwhile, healthcare and education remained stable in both years. In 2016, several industries, including construction, manufacturing,
trade
,
utilities
,
transportation
, healthcare, and education, emerged as major contributors. The construction sector's contribution surged more than threefold, increasing from 3% to 10%. The finance ratio of manufacturing,
trade
,
utilities
, and
transportation
also
rose, with manufacturing growing from 8% to 12% and
trade
,
utilities
, and
transportation
rising from 14% to 16%. Healthcare and education remained steady, representing 17% of Turkey's economy in 2016.
Conversely
,
contributions
from agriculture, leisure, and hospitality declined from 2000 to 2016, but they accounted for the third highest proportion in 2016 at 14%.
Although
the government, finance, and business sectors experienced some growth in their previous figures, they remained the lowest contributors in 2016.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words contributions, trade, utilities, transportation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "declines" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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