The table below shows the population ratio of males to females in six different regions in 1950 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the population ratio of males to females in six different regions in 1950 and 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table below illustrates the
population
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distribution of men to women in six different regions in 1950 and 2005.
Overall
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,there is significant growth in the
population
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rate
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from 1950 to 2000 in 4 countries which are Africa , Asia , Latin
America
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, and Oceania
while
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there is
remarkable
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a remarkable
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drop in the
rate
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in other communities
such
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Europe
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as Europe
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and North
America
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. It is
predictied
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predicted
that the percentage will slightly decrease in most of the
of
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apply
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countries in 2050. First of all,the world
population
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is
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apply
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dramaticaly
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dramatically
increase
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increased
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form
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from
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1950 to 2000 from 2.5 billion
-6
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to -6
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billion. which is a huge number of
population
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.Africa and Asia
countnue
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continue
continued
until 2000 to increase in their
rate
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by 4%
of
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apply
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each, but over
the
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apply
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time in
2050
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2050,
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it
predicted
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is predicted
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for Africa to reach 20%
while
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Asia may drop slightly by 1%. Second , the Europe
population
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considered
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was considered
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to be high in 1950
by
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at
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22% but there is
noticeable
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a noticeable
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drop in their
rate
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until
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to
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12% and in the future it may reach 7%.
lastly
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, North
America
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started with
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rate
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a rate
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of 7% and
fall
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fell
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in 2000 to 5% and it will fall
further
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in 2050 to 4%,
while
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Latin
America
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and Oceania have unremarkable
diffreance
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difference
differences
in their
population
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, rate, america with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender ratio
  • male-to-female ratio
  • significant changes
  • fluctuations
  • stable
  • patterns or trends
  • regions
  • population demographics
  • economic factors
  • social factors
  • cultural factors
  • anomalies
  • outliers
  • comparisons
  • data analysis
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