The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast food in Britain. The graph shows the trends in the consumption of fast foods. Write a report by summaring main features and comparing when relevant.
The two graphics display data about
fast
Correct article usage
the fast
food
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conumption
of British people. Correct your spelling
consumption
While
the bar chart displays the weekly expenditure on fast Linking Words
food
based on Use synonyms
income
Use synonyms
groups
in 1990, Use synonyms
the
line gŕaph depicts the general fast Correct article usage
apply
food
consumption trends from 1970 to 1990.
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Overall
, the higher the Linking Words
income
of a Use synonyms
person
, the more likely he or she Use synonyms
spent
more money Wrong verb form
spend
Change preposition
on Hamburger
Hamburger
or Pizza in a week compared to other Fix the agreement mistake
Hamburgers
groups
. Use synonyms
In addition
, the Linking Words
comsumption
of these foods increased over time Correct your spelling
consumption
while
that of fish and chips decreased.
In 1990, the most amount of money spent on Linking Words
food
was Use synonyms
for
Change preposition
on
Hamburger
with nearly 45 Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
Use synonyms
pences
per Correct your spelling
pence
pieces
person
each week in Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the high
high
Add a hyphen
high-income
income
group Use synonyms
while
it was about 33 and 23 Linking Words
Use synonyms
pences
for average and low incomers. Correct your spelling
pence
This
trend was Linking Words
also
similar for Pizza with 26 Linking Words
Use synonyms
pences
, 22 Correct your spelling
pence
Use synonyms
pences
and 8 Correct your spelling
pence
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pences
respectively to these three Correct your spelling
pence
groups
. Use synonyms
However
, the expenditure per Linking Words
person
on fish and chips was quite different, with average earners spending the most weekly on Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
categories
, followed by the other two Fix the agreement mistake
category
groups
with approximately similar Use synonyms
spendings
.
Regarding the trends over time, Hamburgers and Pizzas were increasingly consumed Fix the agreement mistake
spending
throught
the 2 decades. In 1970, just under 100 hamburgers were consumed by a Correct your spelling
through
throughout
person
Use synonyms
while
in 1990, Linking Words
this
rose Linking Words
up
to 500 per Change preposition
apply
person
. Use synonyms
Similarly
, the initial consumption Linking Words
rateof
Pizzas, which is less than 50, was multiplied six times in 1990. Correct your spelling
rate of
On the other hand
, the rate at which fish and chips were consumed decreased by 100, from 300 to 200, over the given time period.
In conclusion, Hamburgers and Pizzas were the most popular fast foods among different Linking Words
income
Use synonyms
groups
and their popularity Use synonyms
also
progressed Linking Words
throughtout
20 years.Correct your spelling
throughout
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, income, groups, person, pences with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "display" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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