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The line graph gives data on the proportion of children respects to the total young population in the UK between 1990 and 2001. The proportion of children are categories in four age groups.

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The line graph compares the
percentage
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 of people in four
age
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 groups 0-4, 5-9, 10-14, and 15-19 from 1990 to 2001.
Overall
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, the data show different increases for each
group
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 over the period.
While
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 the
percentage
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 of the youngest
age
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group
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 0-4
years
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 decreased significantly, a steady increase was observed in the 10-14
age
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group
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. The other two groups, 5-9
years
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 and 15-19
years
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, changed at the same time. In 1990, the
percentage
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 of the 0-4
age
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group
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 was the highest at 26%. during these
years
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 it continuously decreased and reached 22% by 2001.
On the other hand
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, the
percentage
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 of the 10-14
age
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group
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 started from 23% in 1990 and increased to about 26%, becoming the largest
age
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group
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. The other two groups, 5-9
years
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 old and 15-19
years
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 old, changed at the same time The 5-9
age
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group
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 started at about 24% in 1990 and increased to 25% in 1995,
then
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 fell to about 24% by 2001. The 15-19
age
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group
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 showed a slight increase
initially
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 in 1992 It ranged from 22% to 24% by 2010, but later fell to 23%
at the end
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 of the period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, age, group, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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