The line graph below shows changes in the youth unemployment rate from 2000 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph displays the comparison of
youth
unemployment Use synonyms
percentage
between 5 different Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
countries
across 12 years. Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
number
in each country fluctuated Use synonyms
along
Change preposition
over
the
time. Correct article usage
apply
However
, the trend in Linking Words
Germany
was steady, Use synonyms
while
the other Linking Words
countries
had a tendency to go upward.
In 2000, Italy's Use synonyms
youth
unemployment Use synonyms
rate
Use synonyms
were
the highest among all, which was close to 30%. The Change the verb form
was
rate
was followed by Use synonyms
France
at 20%, making it ranked the 2nd. The rest were relatively low compared to Italy and Use synonyms
France
with the amount of approximately 10%. Between 2000 and 2006, Italy experienced a significant decrease of almost 10%, making its Use synonyms
rate
slightly lower than the unemployment Use synonyms
rate
in Britain which went ascending to more than 20% and close to Use synonyms
France
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
youth
unemployed in Sweden and Use synonyms
Germany
Use synonyms
were
relatively stable at a little higher than 10%.
Things went Correct subject-verb agreement
was
different
in each Change the word
differently
Use synonyms
countries
after 2006. Change to a singular noun
country
However
, the Linking Words
rate
of jobless Use synonyms
youth
tended to increase Use synonyms
for
all Change preposition
in
countries
except Use synonyms
Germany
. In 2012, Italy was back to the highest Use synonyms
rate
with Use synonyms
its
sharp increase of around 15%. Britain and Change the word
a
France
experienced a similar fluctuation between 2006 and 2012 and ended with Use synonyms
the
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a
rate
of approximately 25%. Sweden's Use synonyms
number
showed a gradual increase during 6 years and reached 20% in 2012. Use synonyms
Germany
, Use synonyms
in contrast
, lowered its jobless Linking Words
number
to less than 10%.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words youth, countries, number, germany, rate, france with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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