In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Finding jobs in some countries could be a difficult one, where people sometimes need to move away from their hometown, separating them from their relatives

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as family and

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condition is not an ideal one, it is required for us to seek better opportunities somewhere

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would lead us to be a better person,

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outweigh its

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. The first advantage

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leaving your family and

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to pursue your career is the vast opportunities it

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career preferences to only the work that does not need you to leave your

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often hinders you from getting a better

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than what is available around you, and

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it connected to the second point,

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is personal

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Personal

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considered as

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one of the benefits for you if you choose

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path. Leaving far from your family and

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you are doing your work could make you become an independent person.

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, if you live far from your

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, you need to arrange your daily

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by yourself.

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could develop your behaviour to be more independent and not too reliant

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others.

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it has some advantages, the

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need to be considered. Leaving your hometown to find a

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means that you are separated

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your family and

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,

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making you susceptible to

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lonely in your new environment.

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, moving away from your family and

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does not mean that you are cutting off your connection with them. With the advantage of

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technological advancement,

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connected with your relatives

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quite

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problem to deal with.

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, if you take a better

job

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different city that needed you to move from your hometown, you still could call or message your relative to maintain your relationship. In conclusion, I argue that the advantages of limitless opportunity and striving

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personal

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the adequate reasons for you to do a

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require

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you to move away from your

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relatives

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easily

be resolved by digital communication,

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making you still connected to your relatives

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not sacrificing your own personal

growth

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