Interviews form the basic selection criteria for most large companies. However some people think that interview is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, most of the
students
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desire to get a job in a large private company. Most of the
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these
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need to pass
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interview
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in order to get
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for the job.
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, some
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think that
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interview
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an interview
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is not
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a reliable
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method
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of choosing whom to employ, but I partially think that the
interview
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is the suitable way by which a company can
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whom to select. I will elaborate on it
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in upcoming paragraphs and give my opinions.
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with,
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decades back there was no
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thing as
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interview
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an interview
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. All the
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were selected on the basis of
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exam, but later a firm in Texas adopted a new
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experienced employee from the firm takes
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oral test from the candidate and
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relevant questions about subjects which are necessary for the job. Later
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method
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is
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termed
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an
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interview
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and now almost all companies have
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it.
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Interview
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The interview
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is better than
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exam as it helps individuals to fully express their practical knowledge rather than just theoretical knowledge.
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,
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interviews have many plus
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it
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also
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have some drawbacks.
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, some
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are shy and
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.
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these
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of
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go to
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interview
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an interview
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, they get nervous
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unable to represent their knowledge and
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are unable
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to get
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.
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, through
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examiner cannot test all the skills of the applicant. Probing
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, there is more chance of corruption in
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interview
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interviews
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than other methods.
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a report
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the Times of India around three lakh undeserving
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got
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selected
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a large firm in 2020. In conclusion,
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according to
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me
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apply
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, I think
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interview
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an interview
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is a good
method
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for choosing
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candidate, but with
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interview
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an interview
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business should
also
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take a written test for a good selection. Interviews form the basic selection criteria for most large companies.
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However
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some
people
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think that
interview
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is not a reliable
method
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of choosing whom to employ. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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coherence cohesion
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task achievement
Make sure all parts of the task prompt are fully addressed, including reasons why you may disagree or agree with the viewpoint.
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coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, which frames the discussion well.
coherence cohesion
The structure is logical, starting with historical context and then evaluating the pros and cons of interviews.
task achievement
The essay addresses both sides of the argument, showing a balanced viewpoint.

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