4 jan-----------The charts below show the percentage of workers in three sectors across four countries in 1980 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts depict the variation in the proportion of people employed in the three different sectors across four nations in 1980 and 2010.
Overall
, The majority of Chinese worked in the agriculture sector, Linking Words
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in the other nations, most workers were employed in the industrial sector in both years.
In 1980, the percentage of workers in the industrial field was consistently higher in Germany, the US, and Japan compared to Linking Words
China
, accounting for 60% in Germany, Use synonyms
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the US and Japan shared the same rate at 50%. Linking Words
In contrast
, in these three countries, communities who were employed in the agriculture area recorded less than 20%, Linking Words
whereas
, in Linking Words
China
, it was significantly absorbed workforce by 70%.
By 2010, the total output of the workforce in the Chinese industrial field remained the same as in 1980, Use synonyms
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otherwise
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rate rose sharply in the three other states. Linking Words
However
, the service sector went down in all states, with an average drop of 10% in Germany, the US, and Japan, and a 20% decrease in Linking Words
China
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the agricultural workers were relatively stable, but in Linking Words
China
, it decreased to 50%, still the largest figure among all countries in agriculture.Use synonyms
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