The graphs below show the percentage of graduates that got full-time jobs after graduating from a university in Australia, and the average salary of both these types of graduates, from 2004 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the proportion of Change the verb form
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graduates student
that got Fix the agreement mistake
graduate students
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a full
full time
occupation after Add a hyphen
full-time
complete
studying Wrong verb form
completing
in
university in Australia, and the average Change preposition
at
salary
of Use synonyms
math
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graduates
and other subject Use synonyms
graduates
, from 2004 to 2012.
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Overall
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to begin
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the percentage of Add a comma
with,
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graduates
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got
full-time jobs Correct pronoun usage
who got
approximately
stable Add a missing verb
is approximately
withn
duration. Correct your spelling
with
within
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propotion
of other subject Correct your spelling
proportion
graduates
employed Use synonyms
was fluctuated
during Change to the active voice
fluctuated
this
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apply
salary
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two
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the two
was
increased gradually over time.
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apply
Australia
the proportion of Add a comma
Australia,
math
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graduates
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got
full-time jobs Correct pronoun usage
who got
steady
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was steady
for
just over 75% from 2004 to 2012. Change preposition
at
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, the rate of other subject Linking Words
graduates
employed Use synonyms
was fluctuated
in 2004 Change to the active voice
fluctuated
only
around 60% Change preposition
to only
employees
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of employees
while
after two Linking Words
yaers
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years
rise
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rose
up
dramatically to over 80% in 2006 Change preposition
apply
then
gradually declined from 2008 to 2012.
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salary
for Use synonyms
math
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graduates
was growth gradually in 2004 Use synonyms
with
41000 Change preposition
from
dollar
to 56000 Change to a plural noun
dollars
dollar
in 2012 which is higher than Change to a plural noun
dollars
average
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the average
salary
of other subjects by around 5000 Use synonyms
dollar
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dollars
2012
.Change preposition
in 2012
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
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