The graphs below show the percentage of graduates that got full-time jobs after graduating from a university in Australia, and the average salary of both these types of graduates, from 2004 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the percentage of graduates that got full-time jobs after graduating from a university in Australia, and the average salary of both these types of graduates, from 2004 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts
displays
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the proportion of
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graduates student
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graduate students
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that got
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a full
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full time
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full-time
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occupation after
complete
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completing
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studying
in
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university in Australia, and the average
salary
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of
math
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graduates
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and other subject
graduates
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, from 2004 to 2012.
Overall
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,
to begin
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with
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the percentage of
math
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graduates
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got
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who got
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full-time jobs
approximately
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stable
withn
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with
within
duration.
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, the
propotion
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proportion
of other subject
graduates
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employed
was fluctuated
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during
this
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period.
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, the average
of
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salary
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for
two
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the two
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categories
was
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increased gradually over time. In
Australia
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Australia,
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the proportion of
math
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graduates
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got
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who got
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full-time jobs
steady
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was steady
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for
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at
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just over 75% from 2004 to 2012.
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, the rate of other subject
graduates
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employed
was fluctuated
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fluctuated
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in 2004
only
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to only
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around 60%
employees
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of employees
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while
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after two
yaers
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years
rise
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rose
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up
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apply
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dramatically to over 80% in 2006
then
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gradually declined from 2008 to 2012. The average
salary
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for
math
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graduates
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was growth gradually in 2004
with
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from
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41000
dollar
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to 56000
dollar
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dollars
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in 2012 which is higher than
average
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the average
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salary
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of other subjects by around 5000
dollar
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dollars
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2012
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in 2012
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates, salary, math with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Graduates
  • Full-time employment
  • Average salary
  • Fluctuating trend
  • Correlation
  • Coincide
  • Stagnated salaries
  • Sector influence
  • Cyclical economic factors
  • Employment percentages
  • Salary trends
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