The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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life

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process of a caterpillar and the method by which the cloth produced by worms is made.

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, there are 6 steps for the

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diagram to show each stage of

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the silkworm’s

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life

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and there are 6 approaches to

produce

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a

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silk cloth. The procedure begins with the

life

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of a silkworm, from the first step to the

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process before we get silk from it. The

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cycle takes 10 days from an egg to a mealworm. Next 4-6 weeks, it turns from a little mealworm to a silkworm gut and changes to

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a cocoon 3-8 days later.

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,

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wrapped worm will be a moth by 16 days. The next step starts with sorting out the

cocoon

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which we have and

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them in

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hot water

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. When it loosens up to about 300 – 900 metres, the silkworm will be tweaked and knit.

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, we will

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silk cloth to be a complete fabric for lots of clothes later.