The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should New Zealand Imports from Australia New Zealand Imports from Japan

The two diagrams provide information about both Australia and Japan collected stuff from New Zealand in the years 1994 up to 2004.

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approximately ten years, Australia imported more goods to New Zealand, whilst, Japan sent less. In the beginning, the country Australia

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started with a minimum of around

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$4 000 in 1994 and the graph accelerated to above 6000 New Zealand dollars in 1996.

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means that

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people were

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different types of goods

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that time which

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increased their money.

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occurred from

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to 1997 when the line graph dropped down and slapped its lowest point of

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$ 3000 in the year 1999,

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, a sharp increase

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from that year in a period of twelve months. To add on, staff came from Japan commenced at

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$ 3000 with a gradual

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until almost

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$6000 in three years.

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, ups and downs happened from 1997 to 2000 and the graph began to decrease to the

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point of

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$ 2000 in the

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year 2004.