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The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. See all user-written answers on this topic Image for topic: The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. See all user-written answers on this topic Image for topic: The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts above illustrate the comparison of percentages for
employement
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employment
 in four countries in 1970 and 2000 between
men
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 and
women
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 aged 60 to 64.
Overall
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, both charts show that
Japanese
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men
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 and
women
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 are most likely to be employed
in
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at
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 the age of 60 to 64. The highest one
being
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was
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Japanese
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men
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 in 1970 at 85 per
cent
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, and the lowest one goes to
Belgium
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women
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 in 2000 at 7
percent
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per cent
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. In the year 1970, the
men
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 easily dominated the
women
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.
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, the lowest one goes to
Belgium
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women
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 at 8
percent
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per cent
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, followed by Australian, American, and
Japanese
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women
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 at 16 per
cent
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, 36 per
cent
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, and 43 per
cent
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. On the other side, the lowest percentage for
men
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 was
at
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apply
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73 per
cent
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goes
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apply
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to
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for
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 American
men
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, followed by Australian and
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Belgium
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Belgian
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men
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 at 76 per
cent
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 and 79 per
cent
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. The highest place was held by the
Japanese
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men
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 at 85 per
cent
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. In 2000, the
ladderboard
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leaderboard
ladder board
 for
the
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apply
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women
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 remained
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similarly
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similar
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.
Whereas
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, for
men
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,
Belgium
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 went through a rapid decline at 19 per
cent
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,
American
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America
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 at 55 per
cent
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,
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Japanese
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Japan
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 at 74 per
cent
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, and
finally
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Australian
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Australia
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 at 47 per
cent
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, japanese, cent, belgium with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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