The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.Write a report for a university lecturer reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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different kinds of

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production in France from 1995 to 2005

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, the French preferred producing coal rather than producing the other which didn't include gas, petrol and nuclear

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in 10 years Looking at the pie charts from a more detailed perspective. First of all, in 1995 the percentage of coal production was approximately 29.8%, which was 1.13% lower in 2005 and ranked first in all 10 years.

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, the percentages of gas and petrol making

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approximately 29,27% and 29,63% respectively in 1995. But in 2005, the former was slightly higher, at 30.31%

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the latter just occupied 19,55% which was roughly 10% lower than before.

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, in 1995, the figure for nuclear

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was 6,4% and slightly higher 10 years later, at 10.1%.

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but not least, the other

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production wasn't

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paid

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the French, the rates of that

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4,9% and 9,10% in 1995 and 2005 respectively ,which occupied

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fraction in both pie charts