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The chart below shows the percentages of different types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buy their houses. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

The chart below shows the percentages of different types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buy their houses. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?
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The bar graph illustrates the average household trash (Plastic, Cans, Paper, and Glass) that
were
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reuse
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 in a certain city from 1992 and 2002.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the Glasses were the most recycled trash in
a
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 city, followed by paper. Meanwhile, trash made from plastics
were
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was
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 the least reused. In detail, among the various garbages, the Glasses exhibited a significant
increased
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 throughout the period from 15% in 1992 , grew modestly in 1997, and significantly rose to 48% in 2002. Meanwhile, the process of reusing the paper rose modestly from 25% to 39% in 2002.
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, the
percentages
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 of recycled cans decreased in 1997 to 12% and considerably grew to 22% in 2002.
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,the number of reuse plastics remained stable and the lowest throughout the given period at approximately 10%.

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Vocabulary: The word "modestly" was used 2 times.
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