The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphic displays how
cement
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and concrete are produced and the usage of
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for producing concrete which is used for building purposes.
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,
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production includes 5 stages and it is a man-made procedure which starts with limestone and clay getting crushed and ends with having bags of
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.
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, concrete production only involves mixing ingredients
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as water, sand gravel and
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. First of all, limestone and clay are crushed by a crusher and become powder.
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mixed
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a mixer. After that, the mixture gets heated by a rotating heather.
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, the mixture goes through a grinder to eliminate the big particles. And becomes
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which is poured into bags. For producing concrete,
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and other products
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as water sand and gravel are used. 15 per
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cement
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, 10 per
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water, 25 per
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sand and 50 per
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gravel are in the mixture
that is
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poured down into a mixer to produce concrete
that is
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used for an occasion like building a new home.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Crushed powder
  • Rotating heater
  • Grinding
  • Mixer
  • Furnace
  • Packaging
  • Proportion
  • Gravel
  • Rotating concrete mixer
  • Raw materials
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