The table below shows the percentage of working men and women in different areas of employment in one country in 1986, 1996 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the percentage of working men and women in different areas of employment in one country in 1986, 1996 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided pie chart illustrates the significant reason for less productivity on agricultural land. The figure shows the causes affecting several regions of the world since it was in the 1990s.
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, the chart of worldwide land degradation shows that over-grazing, deforestation, and over-cultivation were the same cause of less production.
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, 23% in Europe was the highest reason for total land degraded. To start,
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the charts, the Europe region is the main deforestation by evaluation at 9.8%, followed by 1.7, and 0.2 per-cent for Oceania, and North America respectively. The same trend as Over-cultivation accounting for, 7.7% of Europe, 3.3% from North America, and Oceania was not shown population in
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reason. Looking at the table for more detail,
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, 11.3 experience the majority of Over-grazing in a large group of islands in the South Pacific.
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the least is North America only 1.5 %.
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