The given pie charts illustrate the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world between 6 countries which is North America, south America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia.

The given pie charts illustrate the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world between 6 countries which is North America, south America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The given pie charts illustrate the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world between 6 countries which is North America, south America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia.
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The pie illustrates water used for different
purposed
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purposes
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, industrial
use
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, agricultural
use
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and domestic
use
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. The units are measured in percent, for six areas of the world, North
America
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, South
America
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,
Europe
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, Africa, Central
Asia
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and South East
Asia
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.
Overall
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,
It is clear that
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Agricultural
use
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accounted for the largest percentage in four
countries
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except North
America
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and
Europe
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. In the case of these two
countries
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, industrial
use
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represented the biggest figures. Looking at the pie more closely, Agricultural
use
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recorded higher than half
percent
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per cent
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like 71%, 84%, 88%,
81
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and 81
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% in four
countries
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.
On the other hand
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, industrial
use
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showed around half
percent
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per cent
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like
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apply
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48%,
53
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and 53
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% in
other
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the other
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two
countries
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, North
America
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and
Europe
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.
Additionally
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, domestic
use
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hadn't hit the high of pies through all the
countries
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. it comprised the lowest figures in three areas, North
America
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,
Europe
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and South East
Asia
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. occupied with 13%, 15%, 7%.
In contrast
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, industrial
use
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reach
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reaches
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a low of values in South
America
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, Africa and Central
Asia
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.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words use, america, europe, asia, countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • illustrate
  • percentage
  • purposes
  • areas
  • regions
  • agriculture
  • industrial
  • domestic
  • disparities
  • dominance
  • dependency
  • contrast
  • developed
  • analysis
  • living standards
  • population density
  • geographical
  • climatic conditions
  • sustainable
  • challenges
  • managing
  • resources
  • effectively
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